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Re: the Black Forest
really cool beggining and i think the creatures were really cool. I think you should give us more backround on where the girl was from and why she wants to ...
Feb 10, 2006 -
Re: Tony. Episodes of a dillusional man. Part 2
Today I felt like buying a game. I was bored with the one I was playing now that was called "EXTREME BMX RACING, WHOOOAAAHH!" Extremely horrendous Title in my opinion.(wonder ...
Feb 8, 2006 -
Re: Soul
thanx that is really awesome advice. I will be sure to apply it to any other poems i write
Feb 8, 2006 -
Re: The Deafening Rainfall (Part One)
Hi everyone Ive done my best to make my story easier on the eyes because the pre button didn't seem to be working now u can read it without straining ...
Feb 8, 2006 -
Re: The Deafening Rainfall (Part One)
I appreciater your editing, it really helps
Feb 8, 2006 -
Re: Hey I'm Tony C.
Well hi. So your reading my post and you're wondering "i wonder what this post says" don't lie, I know your thinking that. Well, I just wanted to say I ...
Feb 8, 2006 -
Re: Soul
Your soul lies within Hidden but alive And no matter where you've been It always seems to strive It gives feeling to your life Emotions surging through your being It ...
Feb 8, 2006 -
Re: Tony. Episodes of a dillusional man. Part 1
So I was walking down the sidewalk(like every american does, well im not sure) and I spotted someone crouched down looking at a crack in the sidewalk.(having a crack of ...
Feb 7, 2006 -
Re: NEED HELP
im writing a nove called "The Deafening Rainfall" and when i post it everything is jammed together and all the spaces go away and im not sure how to use ...
Feb 7, 2006 -
Re: What! A test?
What! A test? surely you jest Because I haven't studied one bit but I find it's no joke then I feel I might choke That I need to lay down ...
Feb 6, 2006 -
Re: The Deafening Rainfall (Part One)
I did what you said but it doesn't seem to be working right I tried to the first time and i keep trying but it won't keep the spaces
Feb 6, 2006 -
Re: The Hand
so very small barely alive though through the hardships i try to survive no one there to answer my call to pick me up the times I fall I cannot ...
Feb 4, 2006 -
Re: PLEASE REVIEW MY WORK
I'm working on "The Deafening Rainfall" and i would appreciated it if someone would read and review it. Its a really cool story about a female warrior who enters a ...
Feb 4, 2006 -
Re: VampireTorium 1: All Access Pass
hi i think you have something going there, but.... you need to fix some parts in your writings. sometimes there are just pieces of a word in sentence. on some ...
Feb 4, 2006 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Hi everyone my name is Tony. This is my first time writting and its really cool pouring your imagination on the page. Although i cant pretend im that good at ...
Feb 4, 2006
